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another version here: [link]

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I like this version of 'When searching'. It focuses on seeker (hands, eyebrows) and the goal (window). Besides it looks like for that girl there's no certain goal to achieve, she doesn't know what's behind the edge.
The structure of the wall and natural light add a lot to Your work. As well as cornered window.
I would thought about framing without those leaves on the left...but I understand it was impossible or You want them to be appear there. And the second suggestion - for me, as written above hand and eyebrows are equally important, but only hands are sharp. Maybe using other type of focus would deal with it.
I love the way You use natural light, and Your compo.
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this one is better i think :)

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thx ;)

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anytime you need ;)

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frumoasa tare compozitia. mie-mi sopteste un: tanjind spre eliberare.
prefer varianta square: centreaza elementul uman, pastrand in acelasi timp pozitia asimetrica a ferestrei si coltul de planta (mai discret) care decoreaza placut cadrul. mm, desi in acest caz apare o neconcordanta la nivel de sharpness intre partea stanga si cea dreapta.:)

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neconcordanta aia sper ca se incadreaza la categoria "DOF FFFFF mare" dupa care eu sunt moarta :giggle:

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care as zice ca vine de la focusarea centrata in incadrarea originala :)
si mie-mi plac dof-urile foarte mari.

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ah,agonie :heart:

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o, agony, agony!!! :giggle:

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Seamana putin cu asta : [link]

Dar a ta mi se pare mult mai calda.Good job.

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