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the sin VII - the word - by *devllaa:icondevllaa:

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no photomanipulation.

natural light

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=ersi May 25, 2009, 4:52:57 AM
Oddly, this is not one of the photographs I like most in your gallery as far as technique and composition are concerned. There seems to be too much "weight" on the right and the empty space on the left does not really add to the meaning or the composition.
But.
It is certainly one of the images that impacts me and captivates me most! It's charged with meaning and significant elements. That pen! Hiding in the shadows, behind the back of your model, it is writing the words that would make the impact of that apple bearable. Because the apple is the unbearable and frightening symbol of desire, the unrepenting cause of our Fall -never quite falling itself!
This is a powerful piece in your exceptional series.
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=thisisalessya May 24, 2009, 11:42:32 AM
imi place conceptul, lumina, dar cred ca acel colier nu se prea potriveste in cadru. parca atrage atentia prea tare.
oricum, o fotografie foarte buna :clap:

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who the fuck is Alessya? :O_o:
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*devllaa May 24, 2009, 11:45:58 AM
multumesc:aww:

e prea greu sa'l scot in PS

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c'est le poison dans le flacon
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=thisisalessya May 24, 2009, 11:47:19 AM
n-ai pentru ce. :iconcreepglompplz:

cred ca ai putea sa incerci sa intuneci doar partea aia, nu sa-l scoti de tot :)

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who the fuck is Alessya? :O_o:
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~FallingFromATree May 24, 2009, 12:02:16 PM
I just love that you only use natural light in your picture. I wish I could get that good using natural light :)

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I'm not retarded. I just like licking windows.
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*devllaa May 24, 2009, 12:07:06 PM
you're too kind:aww:

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c'est le poison dans le flacon
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*devllaa May 24, 2009, 12:07:32 PM
da, m'am gindit la asta :giggle:

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c'est le poison dans le flacon
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~FallingFromATree May 24, 2009, 12:22:37 PM
Oh I really mean it :) I have a prosjet going on at school where I have to play with light to get shadows on the model. And you give me much inspirasjon :)

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I'm not retarded. I just like licking windows.
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*devllaa May 24, 2009, 12:33:41 PM
i'm glad:aww:

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c'est le poison dans le flacon
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*Mayfair710 May 24, 2009, 1:05:10 PM
i feel as though i should just add EVERYTHING you do to my favorites!

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~~marianne
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